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Max Caruso
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Hello everyone, welcome to my third blog post! Hopefully, this one will be a charm because I know my others...weren’t. Today, I have a piece submitted by our amazing Graphic Design Commander, Fiora Valdis
(You can IM or DM me a piece you drew that you fancy for revision, and I’ll give my honest evaluation on it, what you can fix, and what you did astonishing on! (Honestly, all art is marvellous.) Info is at the bottom of this article)!

The begin this article, I want to say this is an astounding piece. You covered different mediums, you added shading, and the lineart is amazing. I’ve never seen a more realistic drawing of Iron Man, honestly. It looks phenomenal! I don’t know how you shade that well, I could never even dream of doing that. It looks so three-dimensional. You covered almost every vital aspect in art, line, shape, form, space, texture, value and colour.
The lack of colour is confined but the drawing and lineart itself are so amazing you don’t need colour. From a friends opinion I asked, she said that the art piece was: “It’s utterly phenomenal. It’s just so amazing, I don’t even know how to describe it. I wish I could draw like that.”
The only critique I have is the fact there is no colour. But if it is meaning to be just a black-and-white piece, I understand. Overall, I don’t know why Disney, Pixar, or Marvel hasn’t signed you as a graphic designer. They need to do that, now.
Thanks for listening to me talk about art, style, and stuff... If you have any recommendations on how I could improve with my critique, please tell me/contact me! And give a big applaud to Avelaine for her skills and dedication to her art! Truly a phenomenal piece.
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